I don't think it went wrong its just a bit different to original. I think her head is tilted down a bit more so chin and nose looks slightly different and her eye is slightly lower. Its good though and if you didn't have original at side you'd never know.
You're good at copying things as well! I am OK at copying things. I have put one pic of mine on. I really want to see Bleach becuse I saw some on youtube and it looked really cool!